Discussion Board Discussion Board Essay 2 Draft 1 (for Peer Review — due THURSDAY 12/2)
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Due: Thursday, December 2
Upload the completed first draft of Essay 2 here. Make sure it includes in-text citations and a Works Cited page. The more complete your draft is, the better feedback will be.
After you post your draft, read and comment on at least two of your classmates’ drafts. This assignment will be open until Friday night so that you can post peer feedback, but your essay draft is strictly due by Thursday night. When you upload your paper, you will be assigned two peers to review. Obviously, if you’re among the first to upload, you’ll have to wait for others to upload, so give it a couple of hours if you don’t receive the names of the people you’re to review right away.
Address the following in your peer review:
1) What is the essay’s thesis?
2) Are the sources cited and incorporated in proper MLA style?
3) Does the essay seem complete?
4) What are the weakest parts of the essay?
5) What are the strongest parts of the essay?
6) Are there errors in grammar and/or sentence structure that reduce the quality of the essay? If so, please give specific examples.
7) Do you have any suggestions for improvement?
NOTE: The total of your comments must equal at least 250 words. Make an effort to give helpful feedback, rather than answering the questions yes or no.