Peter critical analysis and critical reflection feedback FEEDBACK FROM MY LECTURER
Following our tutorial here are a few brief notes for you.
JS Mill – not an ‘ancient’ philosopher
Scorates – would not have discussed charging students for learning – so change this section
Direct quotes – page numbers needed
Furedi – well known for writing from a strong left-wing perspective – so need to mention this rather than saying he is unbiased.
Go into detail and explain more, for example, this sentence, as an example, needs further explanation “It is all based on the pedagogical relationship level of care between the teacher, the professional, and the student (Love, 2008).”
You should explore chapter 1 only written by Frank Furedi in wider literature of knowledge
Complexity theory – explain more about this and how it leads to universities monetizing their services.
Use more references throughout your work.
Use the ‘so what’? question to identify if your work is critical or descriptive.
Who is Athens- not clear who Athens is( Put some explanation )and also include in your reference
Reference your first paragraph
Who is paid Teacher? (Not sure what that word is)
There should be a bit more argument, A more explanation about the resource funding
For the reflective thinking which is the second assignment. Reflect using one of the models e.g critical dogmatism transcendental or deconstructionism argument